Feedback to Final Cut

This is the feedback we got from our class after having watched our final cut, we'll use some of these as example and supporting evidence in our evaluations.

- Genre is clear
- Good production logo
- soundtrack works with film
- Protagonist easily identified
- Genre quite clear
- genre a bit unclear
- filming good
- main protagonist easily show

- good use of titles
- simplicity of credits reflects well on film title

- Clear genre: british social realism
- shots of countryside/family life-home shots
- Shows it is a social realist drama because there's no music at the beginning.

- Good mix of steady cam and panning helps to attract [audience]
- mix of diegetic and non-diegetic sound where appropriate
- background sound makes it sound more realistic and meets conventions of the genre.
- Long shots are good for establishing the area
- music suits genre
- (could have carried music on?)

- Couldn't really hear the speaking

Poses Questions:
- Who are the boys?
- What are they going to do?
- Why can't they go any further?
- [You can] see it could lead onto a story