Teacher Comments

Further to our conversation in class yesterday, action points to take forward from the rough cut to final cut include (some of which you may have been working on already):

- Experiment with altering the sound levels in the segments that are affected by the sound of the wind.
- Add footage that includes close ups during the conversation segment, preferably with more audible dialogue.
- Alter your titles to effect softer transitions (using fades and maybe superimposition onto live action footage). Currently the straight cuts from footage to black title cards look a little harsh, wheras the faded in 'Everybody Knows This Is Nowhere' is much more effective and in keeping with the overall tone of your sequence.
- Add in your music track (to be recorded???)
- Create a soundtrack in Garageband for your production company logo.